Thursday, January 13, 2011

The Transformation of Kate in the novel Perfect You!

Character Sketch Essay
            What if your world was turned upside down because of vitamins?  That’s what happens to Kate I Perfect You by Elizabeth Scott.  Kate has to go through some rough times because of one decision and because of that decision she changed by the end of the book.  Kate has to make decision and choices for her family and try to be strong but sometimes there is only so much someone can deal with.  Kate Brown is an ordinary girl with ordinary problems, but on decision changed everything in her life. 
            Kate was a sophomore at Jackson High School.  She is an ordinary girl.  She is self-conscious and always looks on the down side of things.  She is confused about life and how she is supposed to live it.  In every situation, she looks for something to make her unhappy about her life instead of just living it like she should.  She is not popular and things that no one popular could ever like her.  She had many problems in this book that end up, in the end, changing her.
            The first major thing that changed Kate in this book was when her dad quit his job to pursue his dream in selling “Perfect You” vitamins.  According to Kate, “Vitamins had ruined my life” (Scott 1).  Whether they had or not was up to her.  The story of why he quit his job was, according to Kate, “Dad decided that the whole desk breaking thing was a sign he needed to change his, life and that the unbroken vitamin bottle meant something” (4).  She is mad at first and thinks that it ruins her life but it really helps her in some ways.  This choice affected her because had to start working at her father’s stand in the mall.  This also brought her closer to Will Miller, the popular guy at school, who has kissed every girl in school and starts to act interested in her.  They start having daily make-out sessions until she realizes that she probably was just another girl to him.  He really does like her though.  The second event that changed her was brought on because of the first one.  Her parents start having problems.  They started having issues with money and with their marriage.  It all happened because when her dad quit his job, and he wasn’t selling anything.  He started buying more things to try to get people’s attention but it finally got to the point where they could not pay for anything anymore, including their house and they ended up selling the house.  Kate’s mother started to get very stressed and annoyed with her dad.  She ended up telling him, “I’m not saying you have to give up your Perfect You business, Steve.  You can still do it part-time I just… I need you to get a job.  A real one” (241).  She also asked that her father to leave if he wasn’t going to help out the family and that’s when Kate thought her world was going to end.   Her father did end up leaving.  The final thing that changes her is her best friend, Anna, starts acting like she does not exist.  Anna loses a lot of weight over the summer and starts hanging out with the popular kids, like Diane and her new boyfriend Sam.  She wants Anna to be her best friend again.  One day Anna starts talking to Kate again and she thinks that they will be okay.  Anna even tells Kate, “I don’t want you to hate me.  I’d go insane if I didn’t know I could count on you being there for me” (168) repeatedly.  She ignores Kate at school though and Kate eventually realizes a real friend would want to be with you and she didn’t care that they weren’t friends anymore.  All of these things change Kate, mostly for the better.
            Change can be a good thing and a bad thing. In Kate’s case it is a good thing.  In this story, Kate changes from a self-conscious person and someone who looks on the down side of everything to a more confident person who learns to live life and try to be happy.  She lets good things happen to her.  By the end of the book she matures and figures out that not every change is bad, that some are just the beginning of something great. Once they sell their house Kate, her mother, and her grandmother move into an apartment.  Her father and mother get separated and he ends up losing his place in the mall and goes to work for Perfect You store in a bigger mall.  Kate and Will end up dating and being very happy together.  Kate misses Anna but knows they cannot be friends if she doesn’t want to be seen with her.  In the end Kate says, “I guess vitamins didn’t ruin my life after all.  They just changed it.  Changed me” (282) and its true they changed her life and she learned that you have to be happy with your life because it’s the only one you have.
            In Elizabeth Scott’s Perfect You, Kate is an ordinary girl with ordinary problems until her dad quits his job, but she learns that she has to be happy with the life she has.  This story teaches you that just because something bad happens it doesn’t mean it has to ruin your life.  You should try to let good things happen to you because when you do you will be happier.

Saturday, November 20, 2010

Perfect Advertisement

Perfect by Sara Shepard is the PERFECT book to read!! 

Three years ago, five best friends (Ali, Aria, Hanna, Spencer, and Emily) were all living fabulous lives being the "it" girls at Rosewood Day.  One day, everything changed.  When the girls were having a sleepover in Spencer's barn Ali disappears in the middle of the night.  Everyone gives up hope and move on with their lives.  The four ex-best friends separate and Aria moves away.  Years later, the girls have moved on when Aria moves back.  They then find Ali's body and everything changes.  All the girls start receiving texts from an unknown person called A.  This book is all about the girls trying to figure out who A is and doing whatever they can to keep their secrets a secret. Perfect is a great book to read!!

Monday, November 8, 2010

O. Henry Post


  • real name is William Sydney Porter
  • born in 1862 
  • died in 1910
  • American writer of short stories
  • known for his plot twists and surprise endings
  • he wrote at a rate of more that one story per week
  • went to jail for 3 years out of a 5 year sentence for embezzling funds from bank
  • during the last 10 years of his life he became one of the most popular writers in America
  • he published over 500 short stories in dozens of periodicals 
  • most famous story "The Gift of the Magi" became a model for stories and movies
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Sunday, November 7, 2010

Masque of the Red Death

The Masque of the Red Death: Prospero’s Journey through Life

                The short story, “The Masque of the Red Death” was written by Edgar Allan Poe.  In this story there are seven rooms each room a different color: blue, purple, green, orange, white, violet, and black.  The rooms went from east to west.  They all had a sharp turn so that only one room could be seen at a time.  The blue room was first out of all the rooms.  Blue symbolizes birth, innocence, happiness.   Edgar Allen Poe’s “The Masque of the Red Death” is a way to symbolize the stages of life!
                Prince Prospero runs through all of the rooms chasing after the masked intruder with a dagger.  As he crosses the floor of each of the rooms, the prince gets closer and closer to his death.   Blue is thought to represent a baby and innocence, which would also be thought of as birth.  Because birth is symbolized with the color blue, Poe put it first to show the beginning.  Blue also can represent the sky and the sky could be thought of as spring.  Spring represents new life and happiness.  So when running through the rooms Prospero started innocent as a baby, but got closer to death as he got closer to the black, final room.  The rooms represent the stages of life, starting as a baby and ending with death, just like what happened with Prospero.    Poe’s use of symbolism makes the story more mystifying and interesting.
                The color blue relates to my life in a few ways.  The obvious reason is everyone was  a baby some time in their life.  The one I will talk about is the day my cousin Jenna was born.  It was six years ago on June 13th.  My Aunt Ida was pregnant and was expecting a baby girl.  My family and I were spending the night at their house because they live in Davidsonville.  My family was about to leave when Aunt Ida had to go to the hospital.  My family ended up staying another night so my Uncle Ed could go to the hospital while we stayed with Kaitlyn, Julia, and Kyle.  All of us went to the hospital the next day and saw Jenna.  She did have something wrong with her though.  She has to this day a disease called Sturge-Weber and has a Port-wine stain on half of her face.  She was so innocent looking.  That is how my life relates to the symbolism of blue.   The color blue is a very important one because there cannot be an ending till there is a beginning.  When Prospero started he was innocent, just like a baby, and in the end he died just like someone dying at the end of their life.  The whole thing is just like life.  The Masque of the Red Death is just a way to explain the cycle of life and time.

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Edgar Allan Poe


Edgar Allan Poe was a great writer.  Last year for school I had to read The Tell Tale Heart by him.  It was about how a guy did not like his neighbors eye so he killed him and put him under the floorboards.  When the police came he took them right above where the guy was laying dead.  He could still hear his heart beating and it drove him mad until he confessed.  I hope to read more of Poe's story and learn more about him.

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Edgar Allan Poe Questions

  1. Poe was born on January 19, 1809 in Boston.  He died on October 7, 1849.
  2. Everyone in his family dying is what influenced his writing.
  3. The 5 theories on what caused Poe's death are suicide, murder, cholera, rabies, and influenza.
  4. Poe called the state of Virginia home.
  5. They think that even thought he lived in Richmond when he was little that Baltimore defines the beginning and end of his life.
  6. Poe was kicked out of West Point Military Academy.
  7. Poe married Virginia Clemm and she was not even 14.
  8. I think the Virginia is too young to get married to someone who is 27 years old.
  9. Murders in the Rue Morgue was the first detective story.
  10. It was published in January of 1843.

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

My friend Kaitlyn and I going to Homecoming!

Welcome Back to my Blog!!!!!!  The first quarter at John Carroll is coming to a close and it was a great way to start off high school.  I have made many friends that I hope to have for a long time.  I have also learned a lot of things.  Starting off quarter 2, we are talking about short stories.  I know some of the terms from my middle school.  I know this is going to be a great quarter!